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Posted bySiniy Prochnost/Pallidae Nox4 years ago
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Siniy Prochnost (Edited)

Name:Siniy ProchnostAge:17Species:Human
Team:SPHR(Previously)Gender:Female

Attributes:

Mental---Physical---Social---
Intelligence4Strength3Presence3
Wits2Dexterity3Manipulation1
Resolve4Stamina1Composure2

Skills:

Mental (-3)---Physical (-1)---Social (-1)---
Academics2Athletics2Empathy1
Computer3Brawl2Expression
Craft3DriveIntimidation
InvestigationRanged Weapons4Persuasion2
Medicine1LarcenySocialize1
Grimm1StealthStreetwise
PoliticsMelee Weapons4Subterfuge
Science

Other:

Merits---Flaws---Aura / Weapon---
Danger Sense2Facial Deformity (Scar)1Aura3
Fighting Style: Kendo2Distrustful1Semblance
Fast Reflexes2Blumenkranz3
Medatative Mind1
Long Range Weapon1

(Spent 5 freebie points on 1 points for aura/weapon, 3 on a merit, and six points for thee skill points in mental another 2 points for a physical point, one point left over)

  • Physical Description

Siniy is about 6' with a slim build and long blond hair with the tips dyed a dark blue. Her right eye has two half circle scars around it, one below one above, and her right pupil and iris have no color, her left pupil is a deep sapphire blue. She also wears a pair of headphones that have mechanical "cat ears" attached to the headphones ear cups, they emote properly along with her expressions. She wears a navy blue long sleeve shirt rolled up to her forearms, a gray/blue winter jacket with thin white fleece lining is tied around her waist, over a pair of simple utilitarian cargo pants colored gray and finally a pair of well worn but sturdy boots.

  • Weapon

"Blumenkranz" is a large anti-tank rifle similar to the PTRS-41 in appearance and function. It transforms into a slim two handed claymore with the barrel of the weapon facing out the bottom of the pommel.

  • Semblance / Aura

Siniy hasn't discovered her semblance and has little interest in doing so, she uses her aura as additional armor and healing and has trained to do so effectively, while relying heavily on her weapons in combat.

  • Backstory / Personality

Siniy is often quiet and reserved, tending not to seek out social interaction, though she is not unkind. While difficult to befriend her she is loyal and trustworthy once the barrier to friendship has been surpassed. She tends to distrust people on instinct and this is part of what keeps her away from people. Raised in a small frontier town she worked in her parents weapon shop for most of her life making her extremely familiar with all manner of weapons and their care and handling. When she was young she and her grandfather were attacked outside of their town, her grandfather was killed and she injured herself while using his weapon to defend herself, giving her the distinctive scar around her right eye. This event was the driving force behind her descision to become a huntress. Her personality is reflected in her upbringing on the harsh northern frontier, she is often seen as cold and methodical, but she has an excellent ability to break down problems and put the right people to the right tasks. She analyzes things as they are, living on the frontier has aforded her few comforts but it has also caused her to care little for race, gender, or age, she judges purely based on facts.

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2 points · 4 years ago

Stats/advantages

DefenseArmorHit PointsSpeedInitiative
23/2 (1/0 armor + 2 aura)6115
level 1

Approved

Note: Long Range Weapon is a merit, and as such it belongs in the Merits column, that actually gives you three more points to spend if you want to, reply here when you do with what you changed, and I'll re-approve.

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Siniy Prochnost/Pallidae NoxOriginal Poster1 point · 4 years ago

I pumped another skill point into melee weapons, shouldn't I have only had 2 points to reallocate because I gained 5 for taking long range out of weapons and then 3 for the merit? I'll get the skillpoint either way but shouldn't I not have any left?

level 3

Yes, but I think you had one point extra from before, or something. It doesn't matter, you are still approved.

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Siniy Prochnost/Pallidae NoxOriginal Poster1 point · 4 years ago

Sure, thanks.

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[deleted]
1 point · 4 years ago

You know you haven't been approved right? Should probably look at what L'Gel asked you to fix.

level 2
Siniy Prochnost/Pallidae NoxOriginal Poster1 point · 4 years ago

I think I've got everything covered I'll ask him to take another look.

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[deleted]
1 point · 4 years ago

Good idea. Just wanted to let you know since reboot is imminent, let us know if you need any help.

level 4
Siniy Prochnost/Pallidae NoxOriginal Poster1 point · 4 years ago

Well if you're offering I just posted all the custom merits/flaws for both of em' in the comments on their respective posts, would you care to give me your opinion?

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[deleted]
1 point · 4 years ago

Let me take a look.

level 6
Siniy Prochnost/Pallidae NoxOriginal Poster1 point · 4 years ago

Thank you kind sir'

level 7
[deleted]
1 point · 4 years ago

They both look pretty good to me, a lot of them are things L'Gel has already mentioned so I'm thinking you'll be good to go.

level 8
Siniy Prochnost/Pallidae NoxOriginal Poster1 point · 4 years ago

I thought so but a second opinion is always good to have. Thanks

level 9
[deleted]
1 point · 4 years ago

You should probably list where you spent your free points for both characters, that really helps L'Gel and other mods get you approved faster.

A separate note, ever have any thoughts about revising Pallidae's backstory? I like a lot of individual elements of it but you've got a ton of different aspects and conflicts there that sort of makes it cluttered and slightly unclear or unfocused on a few key points or issues. Just a suggestion, not a big deal.

level 10
Siniy Prochnost/Pallidae NoxOriginal Poster1 point · 4 years ago

I know what you mean the author side of me cringes when I look at it, but I was trying to get down all the important parts without writing a wall of text, I'll try and come up with a way to organize it better, hell maybe I should just write there backstories.

level 1

Your numbers look good. However distrust is not a compulsion, compulsions are more like OCD type behaviors. Distrustful could be a flaw though, take a look at the post that I put up today to see how to format a custom flaw.

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Clementine Cortez | Ozzie Steele1 point · 4 years ago
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Siniy Prochnost/Pallidae NoxOriginal Poster1 point · 4 years ago

Basically yes.

level 3
Clementine Cortez | Ozzie Steele1 point · 4 years ago

I need these headphones really badly. They look so fucking cool

level 4
Siniy Prochnost/Pallidae NoxOriginal Poster1 point · 4 years ago

They're pretty expensive but I'd love to have a pair too.

level 5
Noire** | Bruin*1 point · 4 years ago

It's a good way to stand out that's for sure, and yet I can't lie I'd still buy em

level 6
Siniy Prochnost/Pallidae NoxOriginal Poster1 point · 4 years ago

Eh fitting in is is normal and normal is boring.

level 7
Noire** | Bruin*1 point · 4 years ago

Why fit into a niche when I can dig my own

That's my moto

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